My first design was also my strongest design as seen by my professor and my classmates. This will be the one that gets refined for the final product. The idea of a person concealing their identity with something like a gas mask is a very unusual and intimidating thing to come across. The angry eyes add to the deterrence through emotion.
This is my second design. This one I find is rather ominous, yet still conveys a bold message. This design touches on deterrence through weapons and violence, something our society is all to familiar with.
Here's the final design, inked and cross-hatched. Canvas size: 6"x9.75" on a 12x18 canvas.